Not trying to be mean
but this was not good, your voice cracked
and it felt like you didnt go all in
i hope you improve but this is my honest opinion
that timmy guy below reviewed below me is obviously and asshole and can feck oof, there is constructive criticism and then there is nit picking to try an be an asshole
this song is the shit doe keep it up
This song is such an amazing intro tune, i used in my video clash of the Spartans, and plan to use it in many more, thank you for creating this song :-}Ebunnie
i like the singing but honestly the song felt like a build up to nothing it felt like the singer was going to start going crazy but then repeated the same things again, the drums were great, the key board ruined it, i am a huge fan of industrial music but this song is bad and need to be re worked :-} i am trying to be honest not mean :-}Ebunnie
I've been posting a few things i don't feel strongly about one way or the other, so any feedback is good feedback and my toes cannot be stepped on.
This piece in particular highlights my beef with premium vocal packs, as you illustrate, they go absolutely nowhere whilst sounding gorgeous all the tedious way.
Things are labelled bridge, chorus, verse so and so.
Meanwhile you pay for what is basically a few sentences in a main acapella and everything ellse is just segments of the same thing.
Now people don't seem to mind this terribly in dance music but that notion alone should be an indication of how crap lyrics in dance are as a rule of thumb.
Thanks for listening :3
you sir are a god, this song left me wanting so mucfh more, i would love if you made a whole song of this style music, feck dat a whole album would be awesome
Cheers for the review, mang. I'm not sure I have enough softness inside me.. I'm pretty metal..A song, yes, but a whole album...I don't know..haha. Super glad you dig it though! thanks for the listen and review!
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